Celtic Elf

Celtic Elf

Monday, November 18, 2013

Some writing

So I started a story years ago, I found it on my old hard drive, read it and thought it was decent, but want some opinions on if you think I should continue the story or not..........please feel free to comment....you need to join this blog site in order to comment........

This is some of it not all of it, left some of the racy stuff out for now....

His eyes were as dark as the night, filled with passion and desire as he glanced at her beautiful pale skin. As she held his hand in hers, they walked along the sand, the sound of the ocean waves playing like beautiful music in the background. He reached over, cupped her face in his hands, and whispered into her ear: "Come love, let me show you that the world is yours for the taking, if you will only choose to follow".

She stood with a light brunette color of hair, which was held up on her head but still had it falling behind her. Her flesh pale yet a shade of pink revealed she was still living. He thought as he pondered on her beauty, why would such a lovely creature love a beast like as me?

She glanced at his stunning eyes as he whispered upon her. She felt safe in his presence, as if she could live in this moment forever, if it did not but feel like a dream. She touched his cheek ever so gently and said "I would walk with you wherever you would lead my sweet, if but only you would ask".  As they continued to walk, it was all she could do to contain herself from thinking "How long with this last, will he be here for me always? Until my last breath?" Seeing so much hope in his eyes, made her feel as if all was right within the world.  This was not the case however, and is not, as there are many things that could pose a threat to her and his happiness.  How could she love this man so, glancing at his wonderful pale complexion, long silky black hair, and somewhat iridescent eyes that glowed in the darkness. She so wanted just to touch him, if for only a moment.  Thoughts of his warm embrace made her shiver with excitement.  As his eyes made contact with hers, she realized that she loved this man, and he was
her lover. How could these thoughts be her own, as she just met this man, many questions ran through her head.

He thought to himself, as he glared into this eloquent woman's eyes, "I could share all that is within me with her if only given the chance, and be truly content."  He had so many fears and uncertainties, for so many of his years, that it was hard to persuade himself otherwise. He thought "How could this be, how was it possible that he would end up with such an elegant, witty, stunning, woman that radiated loveliness and sensuality?"

They were walking together as if they had been together forever, as one. In her mind, she thought how could such a charming man be attracted to her? She reflected "I am not special in any way, a simple girl, who is somewhat smart, and could hold a tête-à-tête on her own." They walked along the gravel road, on the way to his abode.  At first she was uncertain, earlier in the day, when he asked if she would accompany him to his place. She was always taught by her wicked mother, that a lady does not give herself freely to a man, unless that man is willing to make a commitment. Her family said it was the proper thing to do and that they wouldn't want the small town to get wind of it, even if it was innocent.  After all, they had their family name to protect. Even when she was with her family, she felt invisible, as they always looked upon her brothers and sister differently then they looked upon her. It was as though they never had much hope in her future, and they made that abundantly clear every day of her life.

When they walked around the bend, all she could see was a large fence with a long walkway to what can only be described as dim, quiet, and somewhat uncanny property. She liked the anticipation, the oddness and vagueness of the home from outside. Hell, she was always held back in life by her parents always telling her that if she was too nice of a girl, and wasn’t careful or leery of everyone, that something bad would come about her.  As they approached the glass door she came to the realization that she might be taking a huge risk with this man, but she was going to enjoy making love to this man, even if it was immoral. This sensual, caring, person that she truly enjoyed spending time with, she could be herself and he still accepted her.

Before they approached the entrance to his home, he approached her, as his lips would press against hers ever so gently for the first time, but feeling as if it was not the first time, slowly his hand would reach down to her waist, feeling the fabric of her corset. He pulled away and reached for the door and held it open for her as she stood in silence, somewhat hesitant if only for a moment. She gazed into his eyes and felt that she was home. In that one moment she felt more content than in her entire life.

She recognized how strange it was that when she felt him so close it was yet so familiar to her. As she stepped through the door and into his abode, the home was exquisite, yet dark and inviting. Taunting her to come in further, as he shut the door behind her, he held out his hand and grasped hers in his and pulled her closer then she had ever experienced with him. Pulling her closer to his body, he gently kissed her with his soft wet lips and whispered in her ear “Nothing that you do not want will occur here in my arms my love, that is my pledge to you my dear”.

He gently lifted her up in his arms with no objection. As he did so he placed his lips again onto hers ever so gently again, while whispering that he loved her more then he could imagine and to trust in the familiar feeling they shared. Once he reached the landing at the top of the stairs he walked past two rooms and into a large dark room. As they entered the doorway the moon shined brightly through the window, all she could do was think this but just a dream and that she would wake up soon. A beautiful canopy bed was the first thing she laid her eyes upon. It had rose pedals scattered upon it with blood red linens. It was hard to see as there was only light from the few candles lit around the bed.

He then laid her ever so gently on the bed, as he lit a few more candles for which he could see her lovely face. She sighed as she leaned back nervous about what was to occur between them. Never had she felt the excitement and anticipation of his touch again.  
As he approached the bed, her body twitched in ecstasy at the thought of his gentle hands all over her body. He reached over to the bed and laid next to her, pulling her close to him as he positioned himself behind her, as he snuggled and pulled her close, her ass up against the front of his body. Immediately she felt his excitement up against her, and that made her bud wet and start to throb. 

Okay thats it for now..........will write more or share more if I get some feedback